The Best Travel Advice is Also the Best Copywriting Advice

Someone once told me that the secret to travel is to stop trying to see everything and start trying to actually be somewhere.

We were planning our honeymoon in Paris in 2013. I had numerous maps. I had planned routes. I had calculated how many days in each arrondissement, how many museums I could visit per hour, how many photos I would take to prove I had been there. I was proud of the efficiency.

Looking out from the Eiffel Tower

The advice stopped me. Not because I had not heard it before. Because I realized I had spent weeks planning a trip where I would never actually arrive. We would just move from one place to the next, checking boxes, collecting stamps, and leaving nothing behind but exhaustion.

I changed the plan. We stayed longer in less popular places. We went back to places we loved, we sat on a bench near the Eiffel Tower, drinking one of the worst and most expensive bottles of wine in my life. I did not take many photos. I did not see everything. But I was there. I remember that week more clearly than any of the spreadsheet trips that came before it.

What This Has to Do With Copy

Too many brands try to say everything at once. They pack every feature, every benefit, every tagline, every reason to buy into a single piece of copy. The landing page tries to sell the product, explain the company history, list the awards, and answer every possible objection before the reader even asks.

The result is not persuasive. It is exhausting. The reader feels the weight of it and scrolls past.

The brands that stand out are the ones willing to say one thing clearly instead of ten things poorly. They trust that they do not need to convince the reader of everything at once. They just need to convince them of one thing well enough that the reader wants to know more.

Be Somewhere

When I write copy, I ask myself the same question I learned to ask about travel. Are you trying to be everywhere at once? Or are you actually trying to be somewhere?

If I am listing features, I stop. If I am covering every possible angle, I cut back. If I cannot tell what the most important thing is, I do not have enough clarity to write.

The best copy I have written came from choosing one thing and saying it so well that nothing else was needed. A headline that landed. A paragraph that earned the next click. A call to action that felt like the only reasonable choice.

I spent years learning that travel is better when you stop trying to see everything. Copywriting is the same. Pick one place. Be there. Trust that the reader will want to come with you.


I am currently looking for a copywriting role where I can help brands stop trying to say everything and start saying the one thing that matters. I believe that focus is a kind of respect for the reader. If you are ready to stop packing every feature into every piece of copy and start actually being somewhere, view my portfolio or reach out. I would love to show you what happens when you choose one thing and say it well.

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